Apr 04 2008

100 Words : Hidden

Direct complaints to Mr Lady in regards to 100 words, It's Elementary

She sat around a table, sipping on stale coffee, nibbling on whole bran muffins made with applesauce instead of oil. Children Velvet Verbositysquealed somewhere in the distance, but she hardly noticed; she was out, with adults, and she wore the smile that she forgot she had tucked in the back of her jewelery box.

She drew a deep breath, exhaled, and grinned. She finally could relax and just be with these new people in her life. Maybe the sunshine, or her determination, was calming her. Maybe it was just that, this time, she had the sense to wear a fucking cardigan.

The girls are put away.
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Comments close after 5 days. Spam sucks. 26 Comments to “100 Words : Hidden”

  1. # Ashley Sanderson 04 Apr 2008 at

    I’ve never heard of this one? Is this like every Friday or whenever you damn well please ?

    Ashley Sanders’s last blog post..wake up call

  2. # Korion 04 Apr 2008 at

    You have a definite way with words.

    Kori’s last blog post..Flashback Friday-Religious Conversion

  3. # Penelope Anne aka The Mama Bearon 04 Apr 2008 at

    I love it, very nice play of words and thoughts, glad you joined 100 Word Challenge too. Mine is posted in yesterday’s mix at The Cafe, hope you will check it out.

    Penelope Anne aka The Mama Bear’s last blog post..Hell’s Kitchen is Back…

  4. # amyon 04 Apr 2008 at

    PTA meeting, huh?? And you won’t shoot me if I say how pretty you are, right? Cardigan and all.

    amy’s last blog post..Roughing It

  5. # Deb (Missives From Suburbia)on 04 Apr 2008 at

    Wait… is that a black bra I spy under that fair cardigan?

    Deb (Missives From Suburbia)’s last blog post..Know-It-All

  6. # ohmommyon 04 Apr 2008 at

    The only thing you are missing is a strand of pearls. :)

    PS. You are hawt.

    ohmommy’s last blog post..The THIRD child

  7. # Maggieon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Perfectly awesome, especially with the whole back story link. I’m curious, though, if you went with a new ringtone or put the phone on vibrate. Yep, agreed, you look hawt.

    Maggie’s last blog post..Haiku Friday 4/4/08

  8. # Jamieon 04 Apr 2008 at

    That is so absolutely cool! I love it. Fun challenge executed perfectly.

    Jamie’s last blog post..Who Can Break the Spell?

  9. # Betsy Birdon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Lady, you can write. And with that cardigan, you could make it down here in the prim and proper South.

    Betsy Bird’s last blog post..How to Know For Sure You’re Middle Aged

  10. # Mariaon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Damn you’re pretty.
    I hate you.

    Maria’s last blog post..Haiku.

  11. # Chuckon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Nicely done. Nicely done indeed.
    Good weekend to you!

    Chuck’s last blog post..Reality check

  12. # Kimon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Just so damn sexy.

    Kim’s last blog post..Thursday Thirteen - My Trip to Puerto Rico

  13. # Reeon 04 Apr 2008 at

    When are you gonna come over and play?

    Ree’s last blog post..Guest Haiku and Other Random Stuff

  14. # janethesaneon 04 Apr 2008 at

    How ladylike of you!

    janethesane’s last blog post..Fiction Friday - Bad Memories

  15. # laskigalon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Oh, you look so lovely. Um, you probably weren’t going for that, were you?

    Cool challenge–a prompt response in under a 100 words. May have to try that . . .

    laskigal’s last blog post..Thursday Thirteen: What I’ve Learned

  16. # mnon 04 Apr 2008 at

    v. pretty, beautiful eyes. and you wear makeup and like to dress up, even cooler.

  17. # Velvet Verbosityon 04 Apr 2008 at

    Woohoo! You made it!

    Heh. I remember the cardigan days. The all, “yep, I’m a grown up now” cardigan days. I’ve stopped wearing them though. I’ve decided to embrace my eccentricity.

    Loved it.

    Velvet Verbosity’s last blog post..Being Buddhist

  18. # Leslie Dillingeron 04 Apr 2008 at

    You really are SO pretty. You come down here and visit me soon. We need to make out.

  19. # Sarcastic Momon 04 Apr 2008 at

    You are a frickin’ treasure.

    *bewb grab*

    Sarcastic Mom’s last blog post..I like to kill 2 birds with one stone.

  20. # tiffon 05 Apr 2008 at

    You look like that?!?!?!?!?! Man, I’m never showing my ugly mug to you, you’re hawt!

    tiff’s last blog post..Blow me down.

  21. # Tara R.on 05 Apr 2008 at

    I think the smile is the dangerous part of that ensemble.

    Tara R.’s last blog post..Scrolling Saturdays

  22. # Secret Agent Mamaon 05 Apr 2008 at

    I’m glad you are in on the 100 now!!

    My girlfriend is HOT!!!

    Secret Agent Mama’s last blog post..Photohunt: Glass

  23. # Piper of Loveon 05 Apr 2008 at

    You look so soft and femme, rosy cheeks, beautiful skin… perty white cardigan.

    I could kiss you :)

    Piper of Love’s last blog post..This Huge Small World

  24. # TRACIon 06 Apr 2008 at

    argthhh……no that’s not right…

    wrthhhh…….no still not right…

    hwaghhhh……closer..uh, I give up, that was me trying to type out my ‘Danger!’ Cat Call when I roll my tongue and make a tiger growl.

    Get it? Your smokin’?

    TRACI’s last blog post..Just Your Everday, Average Pornographic Sunday

  25. # Jeremy Nealon 06 Apr 2008 at

    Cardigan’s are cool. You should definitely win this challenge.

    Jeremy Neal’s last blog post..Someone is Sitting in My Chair

  26. # BusyDadon 10 Apr 2008 at

    I’d hit it.
    (forgive me for going all MySpace on you)

    BusyDad’s last blog post..The Return of Iron Chef Fury: Kitchen Stadium Showdown