Aug 07 2008
Paltit
Torn from her home, forced to flee, she gathers her strength and runs forward towards her future. She presses on through the dark night, blind, led only by faith in what is possible. She is told to forget, to forgive, to move on. Yet, the harder she runs forward, the more she finds that she must stop and look behind her for a moment. The only way she can see where she’s going is to remember where she came from.
The only way we go forward is to, on occasion, look back. And no one’s turned to salt just yet.
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So well written! Love this hon.
Lot’s wife, right?
You did a great job of taking an old bible story and making it sound new and fresh.
You have such a talent.
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awesome. I love it
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love this- like flash fiction. you should check out http://www.400words.com/
xo
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You are a talented woman!
I don’t know who that woman is but I admire her courage.
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Loves it!
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Oh my Gosh! This is just beautiful! Very well written. Thanks for sharing that with us.
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Stuff like this makes me want to turn in my Writers Guild card. Brilliant.
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Love it.
Damn, this is GREAT, and so true.
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We just can’t get away from that upbringing can we? Guess it’s just our lot in life, huh?
As always, your writing leaves me in awe.
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I’m confused, but that’s a beautifully written piece.
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Amazing! I’m so happy to see words 79-1 came to you. You’re right, though - words 100 - 80 are where it’s at ;)
What a hack.
Hey it left my little wink out…. so here it is, insert after entirely inappropriate remark *wink*
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I’m salty. Come lick me.
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I found you…. oh, shoot. It doesn’t matter. I am nearly 42, I have two children, and I lost my memory with the second placenta.
I love the tie-in between the final sentence and the title. Well played.
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Awesome. Of course.
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Very creative. I love it.
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It has always irked me beyond reason that Lot’s wife doesn’t have a name. I even badgered a priest about it once….
Excellent writing.
And I just noticed your sign in stuff. Hysterical. :D