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Thursday
May292008
100 Words
Thursday, May 29, 2008 at 1:26PM
A tangling of limbs in a dark, secluded corner of the world between two strangers turned into a child growing around my vital organs which turned into a little man pushing through an unwilling cervix that became soft pink skin warmed by mine in a hospital room that grew into cuddles after owwies which evolved into hasty kisses on my cheek at school doors and subtle snuggles when no one was looking which will change into handshakes at college dorms one day. For now, forever, I hold fast to the memory of my soft, sweet, perfect creation pressed against me.100 words: Against. See the others here.
Reader Comments (28)
Oh, this is absolutely beautiful. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this.
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Amazing. I love how you don't use punctuation. It gives it a breathless and urgent quality.
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Beautiful.
'nuff said.
This is beautiful. Truly.
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Beautiful!
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awesome, hon. just awesome!
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Exactly. Well put.
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That's an amazing subject to fit into 100 words. Very brave. Somehow you managed to sum it up and it was just beautiful!
Boy, when presented with a challenge, you go above and beyond. It was like word chocolate.
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This is really good. You should put all of your 100 words entries in a little book. I'd buy it.
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If that's not poetry, I don't know what is.
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Loved that! So much!
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You just gave me shivers. And in a good way.
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;-)
You make me smile.
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So beautiful.
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*applause*
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I bow to you. That was...breath taking.
I put mine up at http://reneedaniels.wordpress.com
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that was nice. well written. how sweet, how sweet and so so true. amazing how life surrounds us when we become mothers. the fact that we can grow a child, a human being inside us, is just amazing. i never cease to wonder about that.
I loved this! It's how we all see the passage of time with our kids, isn't it?
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Gorgeous.
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Wow.
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Very efficient, very effective.
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You are lovely.
Wow. That was incredible, though since I'm in the midst of the owwies kisses, I don't even want to think about the subtle snuggles and the hasty kisses or *gulp* the handshakes.
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Perfect! I loved the way you use those words, "perfect creation pressed against me" , so beautiful! thanks for the post.
So beautiful!
Truly.
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lovely.
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Bravo!